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Sunday, January 31, 2010
Creative Writing #1: Writing in Reverse
http://www.3situations.com/BillSullivanWorks/MT3.html
-it's the last one on the right with blond hair.
7:00- Steve gets up, feeling like shit today, he’s so angry because he just lost his job and his girlfriend of one year broke up with him because he was too violent and needed anger management.
8:00- Steve walks towards the window and just stares in anger at all the people walking down his block. Steve doesn’t change his clothes; take a shower, or anything.
10:00- Steve’s just sitting around doing nothing in his dark, lonely apartment. All around things are just thrown everywhere, clothes, trash, and other objects.
11:05- Steve decides to get out of the house he brings his wallet, music, and pocketknife, he doesn’t realize what he’s about to do. Steve walks out of his apartment, down the stairs and through the front door. He looks around at the crowded street he lives on. Since he doesn’t own a car he starts walking towards the bus stop which is about a couple blocks away. When he finally makes it to the bus stop he thinks about going to his ex-girlfriend’s house to talk things over with her. All Steve wants is to make a change in his life and he’ll do whatever it takes to get her back.
11:20- Steve’s ex- girlfriend lives on the other side of town. He takes the 13 bus route which takes him only a couple blocks away from her house. Steve’s already frustrated because the bus was running late so that meant more people on the bus, but he didn’t care too much about it.
12:40- Steve has arrived at his ex girlfriend Jennifer’s house. He rings the doorbell, but no answer, he rings it the second time… still no answer. At this point Steve’s getting upset, he rings the doorbell one last time… then she finally answers the door. Jennifer just stands there and then after a long pause she welcomes him in.
12:50- She asks if he wanted anything to drink and Steve gives a simple no thanks. They go into the living room, sit down, and talk about their relationship. Steve talks about getting help with his anger problems and getting back together with Jennifer. Suddenly Jennifer has this guilty look on her face and says “ well I do really miss you and getting help would be great but…” then she cries out, “ I’m sorry Steve but I’ve already meet someone else!” Steve just has a blank stare for a few moments, and then he starts yelling, “What do you mean you found someone else we just broke up!” Jennifer is crying her eyes out saying, “I’m so sorry Steve, and we meet at this club a couple nights ago”. Steve bursts out, “are you fucking kidding me, you stupid bitch!”, then in a flash he takes out his pocket knife and just stabs the living hell out of her screaming “why, why, why did you do this to me!” Jennifer started screaming and then silence…
1:30- Steve just holds Jennifer in his arms blood all over him and continues to cry out,” why did you have to do this to me, I was going to change for you”. Steve heads to her bathroom to rinse off all the blood luckily he had some spare shirts here since he always use to spend the night here. He throws on one of the shirts grabs the knife and heads out the door. Steve puts the knife back into his pocket and is headed toward the subway because it was faster.
1:45- Steve’s on the subway, listening to his music, he ponders about what he has just done, to himself he’s thinking, “She deserved it, she had it coming that lying bitch”.
2:00- Steve arrives at his designated stop, he gets off the train with a serious look on his face. Steve notices a cup on the ground, probably just trash he wonders, he picks it and decides to throw it away, it’s the least he can do. However the next trash can isn’t until you exit the station, so as soon as he walks through it and instant flash came to him, a camera, flashing at his face. As soon as it’s over a thought came to his head, “I wonder if this will end up on America’s Most Wanted”…
-it's the last one on the right with blond hair.
7:00- Steve gets up, feeling like shit today, he’s so angry because he just lost his job and his girlfriend of one year broke up with him because he was too violent and needed anger management.
8:00- Steve walks towards the window and just stares in anger at all the people walking down his block. Steve doesn’t change his clothes; take a shower, or anything.
10:00- Steve’s just sitting around doing nothing in his dark, lonely apartment. All around things are just thrown everywhere, clothes, trash, and other objects.
11:05- Steve decides to get out of the house he brings his wallet, music, and pocketknife, he doesn’t realize what he’s about to do. Steve walks out of his apartment, down the stairs and through the front door. He looks around at the crowded street he lives on. Since he doesn’t own a car he starts walking towards the bus stop which is about a couple blocks away. When he finally makes it to the bus stop he thinks about going to his ex-girlfriend’s house to talk things over with her. All Steve wants is to make a change in his life and he’ll do whatever it takes to get her back.
11:20- Steve’s ex- girlfriend lives on the other side of town. He takes the 13 bus route which takes him only a couple blocks away from her house. Steve’s already frustrated because the bus was running late so that meant more people on the bus, but he didn’t care too much about it.
12:30- Steve finally gets off the bus, he was pretty stiff because he was standing for half the ride since there were so many people and so little seating. However it didn’t really matter to Steve because he was almost to ex- girlfriend’s house anyways.
12:40- Steve has arrived at his ex girlfriend Jennifer’s house. He rings the doorbell, but no answer, he rings it the second time… still no answer. At this point Steve’s getting upset, he rings the doorbell one last time… then she finally answers the door. Jennifer just stands there and then after a long pause she welcomes him in.
12:50- She asks if he wanted anything to drink and Steve gives a simple no thanks. They go into the living room, sit down, and talk about their relationship. Steve talks about getting help with his anger problems and getting back together with Jennifer. Suddenly Jennifer has this guilty look on her face and says “ well I do really miss you and getting help would be great but…” then she cries out, “ I’m sorry Steve but I’ve already meet someone else!” Steve just has a blank stare for a few moments, and then he starts yelling, “What do you mean you found someone else we just broke up!” Jennifer is crying her eyes out saying, “I’m so sorry Steve, and we meet at this club a couple nights ago”. Steve bursts out, “are you fucking kidding me, you stupid bitch!”, then in a flash he takes out his pocket knife and just stabs the living hell out of her screaming “why, why, why did you do this to me!” Jennifer started screaming and then silence…
1:30- Steve just holds Jennifer in his arms blood all over him and continues to cry out,” why did you have to do this to me, I was going to change for you”. Steve heads to her bathroom to rinse off all the blood luckily he had some spare shirts here since he always use to spend the night here. He throws on one of the shirts grabs the knife and heads out the door. Steve puts the knife back into his pocket and is headed toward the subway because it was faster.
1:45- Steve’s on the subway, listening to his music, he ponders about what he has just done, to himself he’s thinking, “She deserved it, she had it coming that lying bitch”.
2:00- Steve arrives at his designated stop, he gets off the train with a serious look on his face. Steve notices a cup on the ground, probably just trash he wonders, he picks it and decides to throw it away, it’s the least he can do. However the next trash can isn’t until you exit the station, so as soon as he walks through it and instant flash came to him, a camera, flashing at his face. As soon as it’s over a thought came to his head, “I wonder if this will end up on America’s Most Wanted”…
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